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The trials of making of a modern lenticular Viking shield

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Returning to rediscover my place in art was a recent process. Retired, and, outside of renovating. I made time to achieve several objectives. Carving, writing, painting, and discovery of ancient shield-making techniques, amongst other art explorations are my goals.  Having enjoyed the television series Vikings, I decided to research Viking shield making techniques, with the intent of recreating a lenticular Viking shield from scratch. Why a lenticular shield? It seemed to me, were I a Viking, I would like to carry the most effective shield.  In terms of durability, lenticular shields are less likely to split under assault from a sword, spear or axe because of their construction. It too seemed logical, arrows were less likely to penetrate, but I have yet to put this to the test at an archery session with my grandsons. The challenge for me was to stick to the most likely hand-making methods Vikings may have applied. As I progressed, it came to me working with wood to produce an object de

Writing advice to my brother # 3 - reviews and reviewers of your WIP

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     I am pleased you have received your reviews back, all of them. That is an achievement in itself, you must have a great circle of friends, keep them close. I get the fact you are confused by a couple of responses but consider this. Your friends may not be reading within their genre, and are not experienced, reviewers. They are doing this because they are your friends and have volunteered to help.   As to the others, great outcome. Where to from here? Despite the advice/observations returned to you, be selective in what you take out of the comments. Remember, it is your novel. Thank each person for their efforts, they may offer their valuable services again. The benefit of this, they are invested in your work and, are now experienced enough to accept your guidance on what you require.   However, simply because a reviewer comments on something, that does not mean a re-write of that chapter. However, if a comment is made that your main character, or any character. Has blue eyes on pag